Only thing I'm not quite certain about is the left foot (from our perspective) on the first sprite. Dunno whether it's because I'm viewing it on a phone, but it feels like the angle from foot to leg is awkward - seems like she's done something nasty to her ankle D:
I'd say that it needs to be more in line with the angle of that particular leg - and having looked again, the other foot seems to have the same problem. Given how far her legs are spread, I'm not convinced those feet positions are physically possible with two dislocated ankles DX
On a separate note, check your shading, particularly on the upper body and hairlines. Feel free to hit me with a note if you're not sure what I mean.
All in all, despite the above, a very good effort - keep it up
DollerInDisguiseFeatured By OwnerDec 30, 2013Hobbyist Digital Artist
The feet do look weird now that you mention it. The position doesn't look very comfortable! DX I'm not quite sure what you mean about upper body shading though, so if it still looks off I'll note you about it.
Okay, I fixed the feet and I changed some of the hairline. If there's stuff I need to fix please don't hesitate to say. I need to get better at this!